Plotline for our film

 
Hey guys,
right now I'm introducing to you a list of ideas for the plot line of our film. It's certainly a different approach from the original idea, but from the help of other groups, we were able to come up with an even better story line for our suspense/ thriller.
-The beginning scene would start off with the character driving home. There would be happy, upbeat music playing.
-High key lighting
-Energetic music
-There will be a change in tone when the character enters her house and notices that there's something wrong.
-There would be low key lighting and the music would sound dreary and suspenseful.
-The house would look messy, therefore the protagonist would notice that there was something wrong.
-The back door could be open to imply that there was a break in.  There could be a sound and a slight view of a person leaving through the back door to infer that it wasn't a suicide attempt.
-Protagonist runs and sees their mother.
-The mother would have bruises in her face. This shows that they were most likely in a fight with the intruder before getting stabbed.
-A zoom in to the character's face to show that she was in shock.
-Folly sound of a heartbeat. This indicates that she's nervous to what she's going to see.
-The screen can fade to black and the title can appear.